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God sometimes I feel like I get trapped in writing one style of sentence when I write and it annoys the FUCK out of me. Or, like, TWO styles. And I'm wondering why I can't craft any sentences that aren't good if I'm not roleplaying - maybe it's because in an RP you're bouncing off of someone else? Ugh.

But then I go back and I read some of my favorite authors and I notice that there's not really THAT many styles of sentence out there, I mean, most of them have commas. I just use "as" a lot. And "as he." GOD I look at my writing and just want to tear it all up.

But it's cool, it's fine.

If I post the first chapter of this fic it'll be the first time I post an unfinished work to AO3. It means I have to actually commit myself to the second chapter. I don't know why that's scary. I don't have a fear of commitment.

On a lighter note: things I'm proud of.
 

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